Link To My Original Story

I have about seven chapters written so far on an original story that I have started. I was hoping if I posted the link here, some of you might check it out an tell me what you think of it. I am fairly self conscious about my writing and any advice or constructive criticism will be appreciated to help me become better at this. I am hoping if this is good enough to have it published one day.

Here the link to my story, it's called Inner Beauty.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2630785/1/Inner_Beauty