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jontinf

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PostSubject: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 4:17 am

Title: Chiffon
Spoilers: I Do
Rating: T, for language
Summary: Ray helps Neela find her wedding dress

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5028290/1/
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 2:58 pm

That was truly amazing. I can completely envision this happening and again you are such a talented writer. I would LOVE to see a sequel where it is Ray and Neela's wedding and she picks out a dress while recalling their experiences shopping for the chiffon sari. This time she ISN'T scared because she is sure. Bravo again!
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 4:53 pm

That was wonderful...a good representation of Ray and Neela's characters at this point in their journey. I could actually see this story happening.
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 5:33 pm

Jontinf -- very nice! You had some great lines in this one. ("He decided against it, because it was kind of kidnapping" -- this made me giggle out loud!)
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 6:19 pm

it was really nice. Ray's feelings def started to show in S 12 however reela's journey was a bit too long!
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 6:41 pm

Hey Jontinf. I really like this chap. Love the loser stuff with Neela. I really found that Jumbo mart funny and it was a nice reminder.
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu Apr 30, 2009 11:31 pm

Wow! Thank you, guys!

KG, I love watching that Jumbo Mart scene. I can never not smile every instance I watch it. I have a special affection for how she says "loser" as well. Very Happy

americanamuchacha020, definitely, ray was so cute as his feelings for neela was revealed to the audience. you could see bits in episodes all over the place. which is why it was intriguing to put them together on her wedding day of all days to see what would happen, what his thoughts would be, etc.

Sandalwood. That's one of my favorite lines from the fic. Reela has so much heaviness and tension, but a lot of the great Roomie scenes are just filled with snowball fights, beer and accidentally being caught watching 'Ghost.'

kjwalker: Thank you! One of my big pet peeves is making fics seem authentic to the time frame and characters. I did struggle a lot with how much I'd reveal Ray's feelings and thoughts, what they would be, etc. So, it's wonderful to hear that it worked.

Admin, you are ridiculously kind. And first comment too! Again, it's so great hearing feedback about your fanfic being able to add to how the show is perceived. And, that's such a lovely idea for a sequel, makes my heart all mushy just thinking about it. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Sun May 24, 2009 6:22 pm

This is a LATE post, but I love your story! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Wed May 27, 2009 2:25 am

Thanks, Akaz!
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu May 28, 2009 2:00 am

where's the sequel jontinf? hehehe
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Thu May 28, 2009 5:16 am

It's dripping out as slow as molasses from my head. Smile

Actually, I've started working on a story set in between 'Out on a Limb' and 'Lost in America.' I really need to get my act together, so I can get it out soon!
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Fri May 29, 2009 5:25 am

Please do put up ASAP Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Mon Jun 01, 2009 6:51 pm

Oooh a sequel? What you waiting for?! Lol

Plus Admin - your avi gets me everytime *sigh* - oh and the irony doesn't go amiss when I see yours Jontinf Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Chiffon   Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:10 am

So, I think it's going to be out by the end of this week, or the beginning of next. I really think so, assuming I can get it to a beta before then.

And, it has chapters and everything, so I'm a little excited. tongue
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