Prelude

Title: Prelude
Rating: T
Spoilers: Takes place in between “Out on a Limb” and “Lost in America.”
Summary: Ray now came home to someone, to a friend.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5122417/1/

AAaaw Jontinf - I really like this chapter - the ice cream is cute. Like the fact that you are mentioning Rays' backdround. Ray needs to be cheered up too- so nice. Will they be stopping at a bar and drinking tequila on the way????
Can not wait till the next part. Nice to see the attraction growing and shown during this period from out on a limb and lost in america.
Good stuff. Keep at it. Can't wait till the next part.

Thanks, KG!

You know, you're on the right track with that prediction..

Oh, and Part Two is up!

Just read both parts and loved it! Couldn't get the review bit working at FF.net so I thought I would tell you here

Oooh - just read it and it was good - Morris and his 4 nipples that episode cracked me up - good reference. I still remember him showing Pratt and being like 'I've never dated a sister' - or something like that - so funny.
Really good chapter. Can't wait for more.

Woohoo.

Thanks so much, Sammy!! Darn FF.net. Heh.

Thanks, KG. I love Morris. And Pratt. And the two of them together. I don't think I've ever thought of that scene and not just beamed like a fool.

Awesome. I can believe that would have happened. Keep writing, this is great!

Thanks, Pezm!

Awesome as usual

Admin! Thank you!! And, where the heck have you been? lol

Aw love it! Your fanfics are just like the behind the scenes moments of Reela we never got, and the banters great as always. Rays comment about dropping in on the convenience store so Neela could say hi to some colleagues comment amused me greatly. Ray saying bollocks to Neelas bad day, I absolutely love that, and its so sweet Ray was embarrassed when he caught her naked- she really is his princess.

I like the mentions of the little sister too, it makes more sense to Neelas character to have had her sister visit and them be close. Of course the undeniable Reela chemistry not going unnoticed there either.

Hope you keep writing, they're always a great read and thankyou for posting them for us.

haha, been busy and life is gotten a bit iffy lately. But I'm trying to make it all fit in

Aw, Admin, sorry to hear that! I'm glad that it's beginning to get better though! And, again, thanks so much for stopping by and commenting.

Hey, anna!!! Thank you a whole bunch for such great feedback. I love it. And, I love these two. That's the great part of writing these kinds of fanfic, where you get to revisit all that banter and reela moments. I always thought it'd be interesting to set a story in between that moment where she has her head on his shoulder and where he's wiping "coffee" off her blouse. Just so much shippy potential in between.

PART THREE ADDED.

jontinf wrote:

PART THREE ADDED.

Just read it and I loved it! I love the way Ray got called "raymond"

Thank you! Quick response! Hee. I think I have always wanted that to happen to him in a fic.

jontinf wrote:

Thank you! Quick response! Hee. I think I have always wanted that to happen to him in a fic.

LOL, I'm a fast reader Too bad I don't write as fast....you've inspired me to update my fics..so that gives you an extra cookie, one for inspiration, the other for another amazing chapter!

Aww. Yay! More Reela fic to go around. Always a good thing.

jontinf wrote:

Aww. Yay! More Reela fic to go around. Always a good thing.

LOL, and God knows I've got so many that need updating...plus a League of Extraordinary Gentlemen fic

Hey Jontinf - I do love it and luis reminds me a little of dexter in quintessence of dust - that is one of my best ER episodes when Ray takes him to a bar and he plays many rivers to cross and it shows clemente and abby talking to her mom.
You must write more - I really like it and it nostalgic reminder of s11 and 12 when ER was fun, fun fun.

Great work!

Truth be told, S 15 was an amazing season, alot of emotions all packed in one, the one episode I probably didnt like the most was the finale, it just lacked alot of the spunk like ER had in S 13, reela wasnt there and alot of others werent either...if reela would of been there, perhaps luby, then maybe it would of been great. it just lacked alot..what i realized, neela made ER alot better than thought, without neela there, it just was missing something...ray too.

Thanks, KG. Yeah, the Dexter/Ray moments are definitely one of my favorite Ray moments. You see him grow up a little there. He's just such a mensch. There should've been more moments like that! I think I have an obession with S12 right now. Saying that it was an interesting time for the characters is probably a horrible understatement. Thank you for reading!

americanamuchacha! good to see you on the boards again. it's been getting really slow here... so it goes, right?

thank you so much for dropping by and commenting on the story. yes, neela and ray certainly added a certain freshness to show. at the same time, they also continued that sort of embodied goodness and complexity of the past doctors.

and, i guess, we always have fanfic to add in what we didn't get.