Prelude

Part Four is UP!

How clever of you! Is that the origin of the pic?

Hey Jontinf!

I've just read the fourth chapter and I love it. It's so cute and love the fact that there is now a story behind the picture. And they dance together.

There are so many parts that are cute and make me laugh - love the sizing of the hands. I've had that done to me hehe - they tend to say that I have big hands- lol.

And when Neela talks of being a doc- I think we forget that it is horrible and morbid - my sister is a doc and she does find it upsetting at times.

Also know this is random but the cowbell reminds me of a bollywood film with SRK.

Next one please. Always a pleasure reading your work.

Aww I really do love the way you write! - such a natural flow to it all Please update soon!!!

Thanks, Pezm! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And, yes.

Thanks for commenting, KG! It was fun writing all that Reela cuteness. I LOVE that you mentioned the SRK film and the cowbell-- Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge. I never thought about that, but that's so great! One of my favorite Bollywood films, too.

Akaz, thank you! Good to hear from you again, as well. I will definitely update very soon.

Just completed the story.

Cheers.

Hi Jontinf!

I really LOVED your last chapter, just so nicely executed. Your writing is really good. I can not even explain how much I love it -I'm speechless. So beautifully written.

You must write more! Maybe some awkward moments (that we all love) like in lost in america when ray is taking that so called coffee off her shirt and they gaze into one anothers eye. Neela realising there is something here.

BTW -DDLJ is a classic (uv got good taste in Bollywood films)- I am totally in love with SRK - he makes my heart melt esp in Veer Zara. Shame they don't do them like they use to.

KG, I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah, it felt right to just end it in a nice, pretty place, because we know how it all goes kind of downhill after that. It was also a great time to indulge in, it's classic Ray/Neela, why we liked them in the first place-- and then with all the tension emerging. Good stuff. lol

It was truly, truly wonderful to hear your feedback. It just was. And definitely motivates me to try again.

SRK is so great. Ah, I can't even get started on him. I'll never shut up. He's usually a safe bet if you want to see a good Bollywood romcom. I was tickled silly when they played the wedding song from K3G in 'Shifting Equlibrium.' SRK + Reela. That is pretty cool. And now everytime I hear the song, I think of ER.

Wow, a great ending Jontinf, I thought the coffee stain moment and the strange bedfellows scenes were so emotionally charged as they were, without now thinking all this went on in between. I shall have a hankie at the ready for the next time I watch strangebedfellows. and a fan handy for Lost in America

Loved the 'off the wall' wedding and everything about it. They danced... and Ray gave her champagne and wanted it to be like the dances she never went to growing up, and then part where Neela looks over at Ray as a touch base moment, Aw!.

Thanks again

Thanks for the feedback!

I love those scenes. Quite honestly, this whole story was inspired by those four big roomie scenes with her coming home to him after the bad day, the coffee scene, the stir-fry scene and, of course, Strange Bedfellows. I think I watched those four scenes an unhealthy amount to put myself in a certain mood to write. So, it's wonderful to hear that the story stuff has settled in with the show's events.

Those two are... way too lovely around each other. Can't help want to color in between the lines for them, and think up all the things they'd say to each other, and act around each other off-screen... as kind of dirty as that may sound.

Hey, everyone! Hope everything is well, and just letting you know that I have a new fic up.