The Missing Pieces--New Fanfic

Hey, here's the new fanfic I've been working on. It's called 'The Missing Pieces'. I just posted the 2nd chapter. Hope you like it! Let me know what you think!



http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4974101/1/The_Missing_Pieces

good job hun..

i just wish we could SEE the great fanfics ive read

Thanks American!! It's still a work in progress but I'll keep you guys updated! Yeah I think we all do but hey at least fanfic's are the next best thing right?

babyblue wrote:

Thanks American!! It's still a work in progress but I'll keep you guys updated! Yeah I think we all do but hey at least fanfic's are the next best thing right?

Im not losing hope tho..

I loved it Babyblue. Well done.

Thanks KG!!

I added two more chapters, so go check it out and let me know what you think!

Oh Babyblue - I've just read it and loved it. I can't wait till your next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

KG wrote:

Oh Babyblue - I've just read it and loved it. I can't wait till your next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww you're so sweet KG!! I'm so glad you like my story hehe. I think I always feel a little self conscience of all my work, like I could do better. That's why I really love when people tell me they like it, thank you.

Just wanted to let you know that another chapter is up so go over and check it out! Hope you like it!

amazing job babyblue!

im hooked...i want more

Aaawww - just read the next chapter and am looking forward to the next installment. I loved it the fact that it there is a 'Only Connect' reminder and full circle/ deja vu with him asking her to live with him. So sweet Babyblue - I really, really liked it. I was smiling whilst reading through it.

Thanks American and KG!! You guys are too sweet!

I just posted another chapter, go over and check it out! Hope you like it!

babyblue wrote:

Thanks American and KG!! You guys are too sweet!

I just posted another chapter, go over and check it out! Hope you like it!

omg....im hooked...i want more of that!

Just read it and love it!!! Lovee that he was cooking her the stir fry and the reference about Neela's cooking. lol. You must write more Babyblue - I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks again you guys!! And love that you're catching all the references!! I just posted another chapter. Go over and check it out! Also wanted to let you know to read very slowly and see what you can catch!!!

Just read it babyblue and it is v. good. Loved all the references the honey? and ray taking the scent of her hair - reminded me of haunted. Next chapter please.

so great babyblue.....

its sappy but i love it.

i just want to see those scenes...*sniff*

Thank again!! Superb job at catching the subtle hints KG!
And so do I American

Just to let you know, I just posted a new chapter! See what hints you can pick up this time!!

another amazing chapter, i picked up alot of hints. so sweet...its weird to read it cuz its never happened to em before and its like wow, they're together :-O

Am loving it once again Babyblue and the subtle hints into the past. The movies and pizza and a few other things. Fantastic stuff- keep it up.

Love it too, great job!

Aww, thanks guys!! A new chapter is up so go over and check it out!

great job babyblue!

Aaawww- I really love it Babyblue. I love them chinese and Neela looking at Ray and 'What' - reminders of haunted. So funny with the thriller films. And it's so cute they went on their first date- very funny too. Can not wait for the next one.

Thanks again!!

I just posted the last chapter! Thank you guys for reading, hope you like my ending!

Thank you for the last chapter Babyblue. It was fantastic. I liked the way you put in his mom's realistation of the importance and significance of Neela moving to BR. Loved the fact that they can seee a future together too. Very sweet. t made me appreciate the fact that she did that all over again.
Your work has been splendid - always a pleasure to read! Cheers for the shoutout.